Monday, October 29, 2007

Salvation

(Night, Window, Moon)

Perhaps this smoke
I inhale
would heal my wound.
Perhaps this smoke
I exhale
would take away with it
the pain.
Tears my tears,
atleast you dont go;
you were my own.
I thus close my eyes.
I dont want them
to open again.
Ever.

3 comments:

Awais Aftab said...

Very beautiful words.

Unknown said...

gud expression :)

dranz3r said...

the poem u wrote is very good......like u said.....its very much like my own.....and yes u r right abt the fact tht the mood of my poem was different....and the mood in which i wrote the comments was different.....cuz i was high on weed while writing the poem... :D